My First Character Template
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My First Character Template
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22-12-2008, 04:19 AM
This is my first sprite, that I have been working on for a couple of hours. I seriously need some C&C. Tell me what I am lacking!!!! PLEASE! lol :lol:
This Is The Base ![[Image: MYSPRITE.png]](http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/alucard1213/MYSPRITE.png){kind=icon} This Is An Example ![[Image: Spritetastic.png]](http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/alucard1213/Spritetastic.png){kind=icon}
22-12-2008, 04:56 AM
They look funny, but I like them. Armor needs some help though
22-12-2008, 05:04 AM
LOL, Thanks! Yeah The Armor was really a 8 minute job, but I am going to fix it up later.
22-12-2008, 07:42 PM
scary shit
22-12-2008, 08:21 PM
Mithlomion Wrote:scary shit LOL! That hurt my pride!!!! :lol: NEW ![[Image: MYSPRITE-1.png]](http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/alucard1213/MYSPRITE-1.png){kind=icon} ![[Image: Spritetastic-1.png]](http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e198/alucard1213/Spritetastic-1.png){kind=icon} OLD I wish they had Imgzoom on this forum so you can see what I did, but on my base sprite I shaded around the face and connected the neck to the body, and on my example I made the helm more darker and full and I also mess with the sword.
22-12-2008, 08:32 PM
Looks like a UFO.
22-12-2008, 08:40 PM
Looks like Rayman.
22-12-2008, 08:41 PM
LOL! and I wasn't even going for the rayman style, but It came out that way.
22-12-2008, 08:45 PM
the faces scare me
22-12-2008, 08:51 PM
Looks constipated.
22-12-2008, 08:54 PM
Looks diffrent.
(Thought I should keep the train going)
22-12-2008, 08:55 PM
alucard12 Wrote:Looks diffrent. I thought you should improve it..
22-12-2008, 09:07 PM
He's trying.
If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants?
22-12-2008, 09:24 PM
Matt Wrote:He's trying. Thank you Matt. This is the style that I wanted to use for my game, but I just wanted to know some tips to make it better. All I got from most of you guys were negative comments with no tips for improvements.
22-12-2008, 09:35 PM
alucard12 Wrote:Matt Wrote:He's trying. Tip 1 then, remove the pink color from his face. That's obviously how he looks constipated.
22-12-2008, 09:36 PM
I have no idea if this might help, but maybe moves there hands up a bit, so they don't look so awkward. I know that is where they should go if you had arms, but you don't and so its hard to piece in what the hands are attached too.
22-12-2008, 09:41 PM
Well, the pink part was supposed to be a sign of the sprite blushing,but I will remove it and see if it works out.
Okay I was kind of stuck on the hands part. Thanks for the tip.
23-12-2008, 01:20 AM
alucard12 Wrote:Well, the pink part was supposed to be a sign of the sprite blushing,but I will remove it and see if it works out. Do an anime stlye blush ![[Image: Blush.jpg]](http://www.basugasubakuhatsu.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2006/07/Blush.jpg)
23-12-2008, 01:23 AM
Don't. Anime is for fags.
27-12-2008, 11:49 PM
Matt Wrote:Don't. Anime is for fags.dam you are like the nices person in the forums im not trying to sound sarcastic
28-12-2008, 01:07 AM
redhipo Wrote:Matt Wrote:Don't. Anime is for fags.dam you are like the nices person in the forums im not trying to sound sarcastic Yes, he is.. /sarcasm] |
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