Sample Sketch of Manga to go along with benign.

[Granite]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35060687/

Please comment, and put both good and bad criticism I need to know what I suck at when drawing please. Note Also this is my first attempt at drawing.

edit... submitted also my back ground attempt .. drawing an actual background.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/35099742/

[Andrew]

okay its pretty rough. Everything looks like its flat, like it doesnt have z axis, which isnt good for camera angles such as those. smoothing out the lines and a little shading would do wonders.

[Minatours]

Good attempt for a first try. I like the background

[Anarchy]

i like both except the pants on the dude, other than that its good. you should have them inked and colored.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/31021797/
I had mine done for $20. it is for a game i was making in c++.

[Minatours]

Wow, incredible

[Anarchy]

she did that for me about a year ago shes gotten alot better. but if you ever get good with anime i suggeust getting a cheap $80 waccom tabblet. im getting one i just need s&h

[Minatours]

Got one. Bit cheaper than $80.

http://www.backoffice.be/shop/informati ... 420%2FG-NL

Does the job

[Anarchy]

nice, i want to get laptop one, the ones where u turn screen 180' and u fold it down and it has a stylus. ima get a waccom one tho.

[Minatours]

Yeah, the laptop one is great but more money