Hi guys, Im making a sprite for a game and I tried making a uber cute eyed styled sprite and this where I ended:
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I'd appreciate critics, comments and 1/10 rating
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THATS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!!! YEEEEHAAAWW!!!!
11/10  hock:
Wow thats nice  what game is it for ? 10/10
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- 1. Kawaii is spelt with 2 i's
2. The guy looks uber pissed off hock:
3. He's very, very, very shiny
4. He looks like he's about 3 or 4 imo.
It's alright altogether, could have made it better if you spent a bit more time on it.
6/10.
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Why aren't maps and shit loaded up in a dynamic array?
Jacob:
the 4 people that know how are lazy
Robin:
Who are those 4 people?
Jacob:
um
you, me, and 2 others?
Robin Wrote:- 3. He's very, very, very shiny
It's alright altogether, could have made it better if you spent a bit more time on it. Where shiny? he only has a light spot in its head, the rest are midtones
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Well, they may be midtones but he still comes off as shiny for some reason :\
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Why aren't maps and shit loaded up in a dynamic array?
Jacob:
the 4 people that know how are lazy
Robin:
Who are those 4 people?
Jacob:
um
you, me, and 2 others?
He has no neck. Why no neck? I noticed that about your sprites. They never have a neck. And yeah, he does look shiny.
8/10
My first impression was very shiny also. I think it's because of the spot on his head. The sprite is uber cute though, haha. My only realy complaint, is that he's too cute, because it looks like his legs are coming straight out of his chest.
Add some dots to his forhead and its krillen from DBZ
[spelling may be incorrect, never really watched it]
I just... don't like it.
He's really stocky, like he look gelatinous.
Reminds me of a blob.
Actually, looking again, because of the no-neck/head-shape, he kinda looks like the juggernaut from X-Men.
Rezeyu Wrote:I just... don't like it.
He's really stocky, like he look gelatinous.
Reminds me of a blob.
Actually, looking again, because of the no-neck/head-shape, he kinda looks like the juggernaut from X-Men. thats because it chibi style
Meh you guys can bite my face its lush xD
As for shiney... it just looks cartoonish; i dont see anything wrong with it imo.
And as for the comparison above, thats not a chibi sprite your comparing to the juggernaught its a chibi image, get a sprite and you will see.
I added some hair, and I think the head looks a lot better. Also changed a bit the eyes:
Looks pretty kick ass when it's not bald.
I think it was just the amount of flesh everywhere messed with my eyes.
Yeah, that's one cute...er, badass sprite 8)
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Vans Wrote:I added some hair, and I think the head looks a lot better. Also changed a bit the eyes:
![[Image: ubervansnm2.gif]](http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8343/ubervansnm2.gif)
vans, the hair and clothes made all the difference!
That is an awesome sprite!
9/10, cause nothings perfect ^_^
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Why aren't maps and shit loaded up in a dynamic array?
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the 4 people that know how are lazy
Robin:
Who are those 4 people?
Jacob:
um
you, me, and 2 others?
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looks great, keep em coming
Had some free time today during math class and used my time to draw up a class for the game, i will make the armor for the sprite later on:
Oh and made the sprite even cuter (check the difference [NEW // OLD]):
![[Image: newbn8.png]](http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/6568/newbn8.png) //
Yeah, i know, you want to hug him.
Who owns the project you're doing this for?
Perfekt Wrote:Who owns the project you're doing this for? GameBoy
Vans Wrote:Perfekt Wrote:Who owns the project you're doing this for? GameBoy 
Haha. It'll never get finished, never come close to a release, etc. You know, all that good stuff everyone knows.
Oh well, enjoy wasting your time!
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