Dooms Sprites

[Doomy]

I'm now pixeling sprites.
These are the ones im making.
Can you tell me what improvements to make on them.

New

Clothed



Old
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... rite-1.png
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... Set1-1.png
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... Sprite.png
Clothed
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... teSet1.png

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... iteNew.png
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... eNew-1.png
These are ones with clothing so you can see how it will look with clothes
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... othes1.png
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j311/ ... hes1-1.png

[Beres]

yes, improve their legs.. They are extremely long.

[Tony]

Seriously, can you start basing it from how humans actually look? The head just look like skin and bones no cheeks. Make it more round. It's horrible.

Does your arms and legs look like that, do you have 1/9 chest of what your legs are. No. So open your eyes and take a look in the mirror. Do you have shoulders? If you "dont understanz" then go read a book "Understanding for Dummies"

[Beres]

If I ever make a game with aliens, I will use these sprites. Thanks.

[Matt]

Seriously, can you start basing it from how humans actually look? The head just look like skin and bones no cheeks. Make it more round. It's horrible.

Does your arms and legs look like that, do you have 1/9 chest of what your legs are. No. So open your eyes and take a look in the mirror. Do you have shoulders? If you "dont understanz" then go read a book "Understanding for Dummies"

Be nice, or don't post.

I already told him the main issue is that it looks like the upper half of the body is leaned back and it has t-rex arms.

[Doomy]

Updated

[Cruzn]

Human Body Proportions

[Tony]

Seriously, can you start basing it from how humans actually look? The head just look like skin and bones no cheeks. Make it more round. It's horrible.

Does your arms and legs look like that, do you have 1/9 chest of what your legs are. No. So open your eyes and take a look in the mirror. Do you have shoulders? If you "dont understanz" then go read a book "Understanding for Dummies"

Be nice, or don't post.

I already told him the main issue is that it looks like the upper half of the body is leaned back and it has t-rex arms.

No because what I said to help should outweigh the bitterness of my post.

[Matt]

Seriously, can you start basing it from how humans actually look? The head just look like skin and bones no cheeks. Make it more round. It's horrible.

Does your arms and legs look like that, do you have 1/9 chest of what your legs are. No. So open your eyes and take a look in the mirror. Do you have shoulders? If you "dont understanz" then go read a book "Understanding for Dummies"

Be nice, or don't post.

I already told him the main issue is that it looks like the upper half of the body is leaned back and it has t-rex arms.

No because what I said to help should outweigh the bitterness of my post.

That isn't how it works and you know it.

[Doomy]

updated

[GIAKEN]

Move the legs closer together and make them a few pixels thinner.

[Beres]

These are actually pretty cool 8-)

[Doomy]

updated

[GIAKEN]

I like it...

The face looks kind of like an alien though. No real facial features and the eyes are just weird and the head is an odd shape.

[Matt]

I like it...

The face looks kind of like an alien though. No real facial features and the eyes are just weird and the head is an odd shape.

That's what I told him too. I like the version with the armor and what not. Actually looks pretty good.

[Doomy]

updated

[GIAKEN]

His eyes are too small and his arms look like they're broken. The old body was fine, it's just the head.

[Pbcrazy]

Awesome Doomy! Your pixel skills are a lot better than they were.