Base character (male)

[Stomach Pulser]

I worked for awhile and made a male base for my upcoming came...C&C (1 - 10)
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[Stomach Pulser]

Also, I made a female:

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[Vans]

1) skin color is weird
2) feets are weird (i wanna see how u make it walk with those giant feets)
3) the shape is not very original x_x

so my final qualification is 3/10 just for the effort

[Rezeyu]

Wow, haven't seen you in a long time Stomache.

I forgot you did pixel art.





You always had this wierd almost over-saturated pallete. If you do everything in that color scheme it'd look kinda cool.

[Majik]

space.bar.is.broken.....deal.with.it

lol


anyways

the.only.thing.i.see.wrong.is.the.feet.go.too.far.outward

a.large.majority.of.people.walk.like.this.in.real.life

but.im.not.one.of.them...

fix.that.and.you.have.a.great.base.sprite
=Þ

[Matt]

Dude, seriously, fix your space bar or buy a new keyboard. xD

Anyways, I agree with Majik. I don't really like the sprite at all though. But that's just me.

[halla]

I would change up the skin color and fix up the feet

but the shape isnt too bad

[Matt]

He has no chin. He's fat. He has huge pointy feet. He looks like he belongs on the Simpsons due to his skin color.

Other than that, it's not that bad.

[Stomach Pulser]

I edited the male to fix the feet and fatness...also, my pallets seem odd, because I am slightly colorblind.

[Ramsey]

yay the simpsons mmo, finally!

[Stomach Pulser]

IMO, these look nothing like the Simpsons...

[Rezeyu]

They're talking about the skin color Stomache.


IMO, I prefer how they were before. At least it was something different. Too many sprites have the same styles nowadays. Or maybe I just don't get out enough.

[Andrew]

Im not a fan. They look a little flat, and seem to have gotten an odd tan.
Though everything is proportional and such, so theyre not bad.

Btw Majik i havent seen you around in foreverO_o

[Stomach Pulser]

I guess that I suck at shading. If someone would take my base shape and shade it accordingly, it would be appreciated. Don't worry, I'm not going to use it, just compare it to my shading.

[Vans]

Though everything is proportional and such, so theyre not bad.

its not proportional, specially for those yeti feets

[Andrew]

unless you wanna make fun of me for having big feet, they're proportional enough.

[Stomach Pulser]

Vans, I changed the feet if you haven't noticed...

[Vans]

Vans, I changed the feet if you haven't noticed...

I did notice, check the head size and then the feet and you will see its not proportional.If your going for a realistic you might want to add it some years too x_X Also check the chest, it looks like he had giant hips. A ruanda version of simpsons characters xD

[Stomach Pulser]

How is it now, I started form scratch and redid the sprite...(graphics gale FTW)

I just don't like the head...
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added better highlights, outline touchups, and more noticable ears

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[Vans]

I getting a lot better, there are still some things i would change:
1) The use of colors: you have some colors that don't have almost difference in contrast between each other. Its preferable to have a few with some nice contrast instead of 10000 colors (im obviously, just talking about pixel art). Try to learn more about palettes and shading techniques
2) Abuse and bad use of cel out: becareful with this man!, you made big mistakes here. For example you used cel out all over the stroke but not in the pants and when you abused and bad used the cel out in the strokes of the body. I'd rather use 1 color of outline and inner anti-alias
3) The shape: it still looks kinda robotic speacially for the arms. And he still has no ears .

So my final rating 5/10

[Stomach Pulser]

[Updated image]


In the above post I compare the old to the touched-up version.