23-01-2007, 12:33 PM
Ouch, that isn't so nice. Sorry to say that. Some tips:
1. The water for sure looks like a pattern, the colors doesn't really match so you could think it's another planet with other colors on the water. You should try and make it blend more smoothly.
2. The whole land part is kinda strange too. There are these squares of grey(?) what that now is? And yellow, thats probably a desert? Then you should make that a lighter color perhaps.
3. The land parts should also shift color when it goes from green to yellow for example. It doesn't really get desert right away, you should try using a green/yellow color in between.
4. And try to make the edges a little more circle formed.
I'd bet you could do a better if you spend some more time on it.
1. The water for sure looks like a pattern, the colors doesn't really match so you could think it's another planet with other colors on the water. You should try and make it blend more smoothly.
2. The whole land part is kinda strange too. There are these squares of grey(?) what that now is? And yellow, thats probably a desert? Then you should make that a lighter color perhaps.
3. The land parts should also shift color when it goes from green to yellow for example. It doesn't really get desert right away, you should try using a green/yellow color in between.
4. And try to make the edges a little more circle formed.
I'd bet you could do a better if you spend some more time on it.