02-06-2006, 08:19 PM
The girl looks too real, I suggest finding an anime girl.
The title, don't do it like that. It would look better either straight across, or up and down.
Other than that stuff, it doesn't look all that bad.
The title, don't do it like that. It would look better either straight across, or up and down.
Other than that stuff, it doesn't look all that bad.