27-06-2008, 01:32 PM
The title was a last minute addition, probably not the best choice.
I took a look at ATITD, wow that's massive!
Same sort of structure I'm getting together for my game but way, way bigger.
I suppose what I was looking for in the way of criticism was;
Does the piece flow well from beginning to end?
Once you start reading, is it interesting enough to read to the end easily?
Does the piece encapsulate what I'm trying to get across, when you've finished it can you visualize a basic gameworld structure in your mind?
Can't think of any more right now but I reckon you get the idea.
I took a look at ATITD, wow that's massive!
Same sort of structure I'm getting together for my game but way, way bigger.
I suppose what I was looking for in the way of criticism was;
Does the piece flow well from beginning to end?
Once you start reading, is it interesting enough to read to the end easily?
Does the piece encapsulate what I'm trying to get across, when you've finished it can you visualize a basic gameworld structure in your mind?
Can't think of any more right now but I reckon you get the idea.