ok a second attempt - and third and fourth and...

[Pbcrazy]

ok i finally got around to working on this again and came up again, it prolly isnt bright enough again so tell me if you cant see it and i will make a lighter one.

I like it...however (here it comes), it STILL needs to be a bit brighter. All I can see is the red blurs, but not much detail...seriously, just lighten it up a little bit so we can see the textures and blood, not just a gray rectangle with red blurs on it.

lol ok np ill get it done in a few minutes.

[Edit] ok i lightened it up.