17-06-2007, 05:07 AM
I getting a lot better, there are still some things i would change:
1) The use of colors: you have some colors that don't have almost difference in contrast between each other. Its preferable to have a few with some nice contrast instead of 10000 colors (im obviously, just talking about pixel art). Try to learn more about palettes and shading techniques
2) Abuse and bad use of cel out: becareful with this man!, you made big mistakes here. For example you used cel out all over the stroke but not in the pants and when you abused and bad used the cel out in the strokes of the body. I'd rather use 1 color of outline and inner anti-alias
3) The shape: it still looks kinda robotic speacially for the arms. And he still has no ears
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So my final rating 5/10
1) The use of colors: you have some colors that don't have almost difference in contrast between each other. Its preferable to have a few with some nice contrast instead of 10000 colors (im obviously, just talking about pixel art). Try to learn more about palettes and shading techniques
2) Abuse and bad use of cel out: becareful with this man!, you made big mistakes here. For example you used cel out all over the stroke but not in the pants and when you abused and bad used the cel out in the strokes of the body. I'd rather use 1 color of outline and inner anti-alias
3) The shape: it still looks kinda robotic speacially for the arms. And he still has no ears
.So my final rating 5/10