NarutoRealm sprites

[Robin]

http://sh80.surpasshosting.com/~narutor/...hp?t=29124

[Robin]

tbh, I don't like it either.

I hope this game will be good for both type of people, those who don't like, and those who do.

[Matt]

Front/Back views are good. The side views, too skinny for the height. That's just my 2 cents.

[Mithlomion]

I think they could need a bit of contrast and reshading, they are pretty much pillow shaded :O.. and they got no light source.. Its still pretty okay, hm.. the left and right walking animation.. in the first and third, it still looks like his foot is in the air. And the total animation is pretty random.. or maybe thats so people cant steal or?

I mean it goes like.. He steps back animation 1-3, then he takes really small steps forward while his foot positions changed really fast.

Ive got school soon, but ill show what i would have done with the sprites.. ill reshade em and change their palette... well if i can?

[Robin]

Yeah, the left to right ones do look a bit dodgy.

I'll post an animated gif of them in action.

[TheRealDamien]

Lookin good kite! LOOKIN GD! 8)

[Tony]

I think they could need a bit of contrast and reshading, they are pretty much pillow shaded :O.. and they got no light source.. Its still pretty okay, hm.. the left and right walking animation.. in the first and third, it still looks like his foot is in the air. And the total animation is pretty random.. or maybe thats so people cant steal or?

I mean it goes like.. He steps back animation 1-3, then he takes really small steps forward while his foot positions changed really fast.

Ive got school soon, but ill show what i would have done with the sprites.. ill reshade em and change their palette... well if i can?

No offense but your sprites wasn't any better. NR sprites rule actually. They've got that japanese look to it which rules. ^____^ Right on Kite!

:: Pando

[Misunderstood]

I think they could need a bit of contrast and reshading, they are pretty much pillow shaded :O.. and they got no light source.. Its still pretty okay, hm.. the left and right walking animation.. in the first and third, it still looks like his foot is in the air. And the total animation is pretty random.. or maybe thats so people cant steal or?

I mean it goes like.. He steps back animation 1-3, then he takes really small steps forward while his foot positions changed really fast.

Ive got school soon, but ill show what i would have done with the sprites.. ill reshade em and change their palette... well if i can?

No offense but your sprites wasn't any better. NR sprites rule actually. They've got that japanese look to it which rules. ^____^ Right on Kite!

:: Pando

He was trying to give tips to improve them, He wasn't being an ass saying hes the best. If you won't even let people try and give constructive criticism, then shut up. No offense of course, because if I say no offense, I can say whatever stupid and insulting things I want. Nobody should really be hurt or bothered by them, I mean, I said no offense!

[halla]

I mean NO offense but theres is too much hate going on around here lately.

If you dont like something just politely say how they could improve and give ideas. This is not to any single person but everyone. Not a lot of new people come here or at least keep posting and thats probably why... they are trying to learn and people arent too nice to them.

[NaMz]

nice art :wink:

[Mithlomion]

Okay, ive zoomed the sprites. And looked.. they are really pillow shaded, and thats not good. Another thing, they got really many colours, you can make the same sprite effect with 2-3 colours.. i dont know how many he had in there, around 20-30? The most of the colours are not even noticable by the eye, youll have to check em by trying to colour the sprite in a different colour.. this is sign of mistakes without using a palette and trying to match colours.. or by using a tool. Take a peak for yourself. if you posted that at pixeljoint or pixelation.. the sprites would't be taken as pixel art. Since it got signs of using a brush/pencil with opacity lower than 100%. Which is against pixel art, im not sure if this is pixel art.. Maybe he used a tool becouse he wanted to?.. like i.. i used a brush for my old Godborn tiles. Anyway im doing an edit of the back side sprite, im gonna try some new palettes and changing the form a bit to show you what i would have done.. Might give you a better clue of what im talking about. And yea if you dont believe me.. open up photoshop, take the paint bucket tool and turn OFF contiguous.

Edit :

Allright i did an edit, not the best.. i just worked on it for an half hour. I got school now so i cant continue, i did the legs really poorly and.. yeah i did't really focus much on fixing the bodys form. Or basically i did't change anything, just the shading and palette. I hope you see what i mean? :S

I did two palettes, one with hue-shifting and one.. well with just regular light-brown skin colours.

[Forte]

i like the middle one but they're all nice =D

[Robin]

Wow. Those are really good Mith!

But, I think they wouldn't work with the tiles and the paperdoll.

It would look poor if the base sprite far out-classed all the other art, and I think the overall affect of the game would be better if all the art was of the same quality, rather than certain parts sticking out.

[Mithlomion]

Wow. Those are really good Mith!

But, I think they wouldn't work with the tiles and the paperdoll.

It would look poor if the base sprite far out-classed all the other art, and I think the overall affect of the game would be better if all the art was of the same quality, rather than certain parts sticking out.

Yea ofcourse, but i did the example in my style. If i were to do the tiles and sprites it would have worked perfectly .

[Robin]

lol xD

No doubt, but you aren't so.

Also, most of the artwork we do have, does look like that. So it would be a waste of effort to change now.

Thanks for the advice though.

[Vans]

Okay, ive zoomed the sprites. And looked.. they are really pillow shaded, and thats not good. Another thing, they got really many colours, you can make the same sprite effect with 2-3 colours.. i dont know how many he had in there, around 20-30? The most of the colours are not even noticable by the eye, youll have to check em by trying to colour the sprite in a different colour.. this is sign of mistakes without using a palette and trying to match colours.. or by using a tool. Take a peak for yourself. if you posted that at pixeljoint or pixelation.. the sprites would't be taken as pixel art. Since it got signs of using a brush/pencil with opacity lower than 100%. Which is against pixel art, im not sure if this is pixel art.. Maybe he used a tool becouse he wanted to?.. like i.. i used a brush for my old Godborn tiles. Anyway im doing an edit of the back side sprite, im gonna try some new palettes and changing the form a bit to show you what i would have done.. Might give you a better clue of what im talking about. And yea if you dont believe me.. open up photoshop, take the paint bucket tool and turn OFF contiguous.

Edit :

Allright i did an edit, not the best.. i just worked on it for an half hour. I got school now so i cant continue, i did the legs really poorly and.. yeah i did't really focus much on fixing the bodys form. Or basically i did't change anything, just the shading and palette. I hope you see what i mean? :S

I did two palettes, one with hue-shifting and one.. well with just regular light-brown skin colours.

ur musculature is like that? they ur kinda weirdo

[Mithlomion]

Okay, ive zoomed the sprites. And looked.. they are really pillow shaded, and thats not good. Another thing, they got really many colours, you can make the same sprite effect with 2-3 colours.. i dont know how many he had in there, around 20-30? The most of the colours are not even noticable by the eye, youll have to check em by trying to colour the sprite in a different colour.. this is sign of mistakes without using a palette and trying to match colours.. or by using a tool. Take a peak for yourself. if you posted that at pixeljoint or pixelation.. the sprites would't be taken as pixel art. Since it got signs of using a brush/pencil with opacity lower than 100%. Which is against pixel art, im not sure if this is pixel art.. Maybe he used a tool becouse he wanted to?.. like i.. i used a brush for my old Godborn tiles. Anyway im doing an edit of the back side sprite, im gonna try some new palettes and changing the form a bit to show you what i would have done.. Might give you a better clue of what im talking about. And yea if you dont believe me.. open up photoshop, take the paint bucket tool and turn OFF contiguous.

Edit :

Allright i did an edit, not the best.. i just worked on it for an half hour. I got school now so i cant continue, i did the legs really poorly and.. yeah i did't really focus much on fixing the bodys form. Or basically i did't change anything, just the shading and palette. I hope you see what i mean? :S

I did two palettes, one with hue-shifting and one.. well with just regular light-brown skin colours.

ur musculature is like that? they ur kinda weirdo

They were kinda random, couse im no spriter. Ive done around 5-10 sprites in my whole life.. Not really what i like doing since ive never been really good at it. And this is the first time i actually try doing a sprite in that size.. :o

Anyway why do you comment my work? ^_^, atleast show some respect and add some comments to the original Naruto Chars.

[Vans]

I didnt say anything to them cause I don't think ti has many errors, it just needs better shading. But its a cool syle anyway.

[Tayuke]

They look nice But I'll have to see them WITH there's clothes on beofre ican really say anything. Sorry :lol:

[Robin]

Very masculine body figure, and yet no penis? manly woman?

Well, unless you want to watch some pixel porn, I think it's a bit un-necessary >.>