First try with sprites xD

[Krloz]

Well this is my first sprite wanted you all look at it and how to be fixed

1st try


I know is suky but is my first try XD.

2nd try

[Matt]

Hips are too wide, legs should be closer together.

Face looks a bit odd.

[Tosuxo]

looks like a baby lol

[Krloz]

Bump updated first post

[Robin]

Vanz style kinda

o_O;;

[Gilgamesch]

Vanz style kinda

o_O;;

lol xD


the second one looks a lot better...

[Andrew]

second one's nicer but theyre all kinda...plump. hock:

[Robin]

The first one has man boobs

[Tosuxo]

The first one has man boobs

the word is MOOBS... duh?

[Robin]

Sorry, I don't speak retard-talk

[Gilgamesch]

like i said...they look so "la la" (thats what you would say here in germany xD)

anyway, you can improve it by takeing other sprites and zoom into them to check what pixels are put where (for more details)

and you could check what color you can use for the skin

[Vans]

Vanz style kinda

o_O;;

WTF!!! xD

[Misunderstood]

naaa vans' sprites are way worse!

[Krloz]

I said that cuz I was looking at your sprite when I was making it but it came out so different >,>

[Doombringer]

Second one is much better, keep practicing, your not doing too bad for you first try,

keep going